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can someone please check my sentences for correctness?

1.Although he never talked to James, John always felt a deep animosity towards him. (CPX)
2.Because there was a brevity of time, the professor was not able to finish the lecture. (CPX)
3.Because the teacher was very cold-hearted, she did not give Jake any empathy when he told her his excuse. (CPX)
4.If the target demographic doesn’t like your product, what makes you think the hoi polloi will? (CPX)
5.Although we are good friends, you should not impinge on my personal space. (CPX)
6.Jim is a very obsequious butler; he will tend to your every need. (CP)
7.Please do not litter, as we do not need offal scattered on the streets. (CP)
8.The professor was very redundant; he repeated the same points over and over. (CP)
9.Before they headed off to war, the lieutenant shared some salutary words with his men. (CPX)
10.Please do not drink and drive, as it reduces your ability to stay sentient. (CP)
CP-Compound CPX- Complex

THANKS!

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